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Dontrell_Burley [TifansanCL]

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Dontrell_Burley

 

 

Dontrell Burley was born in New York City, United States, on June 17, 2007. As a child, Dontrell lacked a mother's love, as his mother passed away on the very night he was born. Year after year, Dontrell lived alone with his father, but things did not go smoothly. His father worked so hard and was so focused on his job that he sometimes forgot to bring happiness to his son. On several occasions, Dontrell felt envious watching his neighborhood friends constantly playing with their families. Time passed until he entered his third year of high school. During a long school break, his father was assigned to work in a different city: Los Santos, San Andreas.

 

Upon hearing the news, Dontrell had no choice but to go with his father, as he had no one else to live with. A month passed since they moved into a small apartment in the Ganton area, a place where many teenagers his age were involved in a wild, unrestricted lifestyle. At first, Dontrell ignored them and focused on studying at his new school. A week after school started, Dontrell befriended a boy he had previously seen around his apartment. Because Dontrell often felt bored when left behind by his father for work, he asked his new friend to introduce him to the neighborhood.

 

Kaiman, Dontrell's new friend, showed him what life was like around their apartment complex. As Dontrell had suspected from the beginning, the teenagers in the area were already deeply involved in rebellious behavior, enjoying things that their parents forbade, such as smoking, drinking alcohol, and using drugs. Initially, Kaiman influenced Dontrell to try a cigarette. Wanting to look like a bad boy, Dontrell gave it a try. Day by day, Dontrell found a sense of happiness in that environment. He was the type of kid who was not particularly aggressive or prone to showing off his strength to others; instead, he preferred to blend in and respect those around him, even newcomers. It was not uncommon for him to engage in petty theft to get extra pocket money just to buy cigarettes or drinks to keep himself happy. With his friends in that neighborhood, Dontrell felt comfortable, rather than being alone and waiting for his father's attention.

 

 

 

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Character Story Pertama: No

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 tahun lebih

URL Namechange:

 

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
TifansanCL

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
$Obscurakid$

 

 

Saya Obscurakid selaku pemilik account UCP TifansanCL bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Dontrell_Burley) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
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Just now, Takerukisamaru said:

Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

1. Tidak.

2. 3 tahun lebih.

3. Namechange.

4. Tidak.

5. Tidak.

6. Di Rumah.

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Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @Obscurakid,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@Takerukisamaru
JG:RP Helper Team

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