[CN] Eddie_Patton to Jalen_Love (reamor)

[reamor]

UCP Name: reamor

Old Character: Eddie_Patton

Old Character Story:

https://jogjagamers.org/topic/314364-eddie_patton-reamor/#comment-3120315

 

 

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New Character: Jalen_Love

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: Africa America

 

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Reason for name change request:

Ingin mendevelopment character baru.

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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CK Story:

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Eddie "Jim" Patton, a long-standing member of the Cults MC known for his short fuse and bad attitude, was sent out to grab groceries for the clubhouse. Eddie had been in a foul mood since the morning, he strode out of the clubhouse, rushed straight to his motorcycle and immediately checked the fuel tank to make sure there was enough to get him to the supermarket and heading back to the clubhouse. He tried to start the engine and revved the thorttle a few time to make sure the engine was running properly.

 

The ride to the grocery shop was uneventful. A couple people looked at his cut, some looked away. Eddie noticed every single one of them and just storm inside the store. After filling up a cart with supplies, he got in line at the checkout. Before long, some random guy stepped in front of him cut the line. Eddie wasn't having it. What started as a confrontation quickly turned physical. The two got into fight near the registers, but it didn't last long. Eddie overpowered the guy and dropped him to the floor.

 

Thinking it was all over, Eddie stepped back and walked out of the grocery shop, heading straight for his motorcycle. The guy followed him outside, immediately pulled a handgun from his waistband and fired several shots from a distance, hitting Eddie in the back. Eddie Collapsed in the parking lot. The guy approached Eddie, pointed the gun directly at his head, he fired a single bullet straight into his head and Eddie never got back up. He was pronounced dead at the scene before first responders arrived. His Harley remained fell down next to his body until a couple of Cults MC member showed up to collect it and bring the news back to the clubhouse. 

 

CK Screenshots:

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[Matchalattee]

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

[reamor]

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Sudah
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Sudah
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Sudah
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Fighting escalated to murdering
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? Sudah

[Matchalattee]

14 hours ago, Matchalattee said:

Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.

 

[reamor]

10 hours ago, Matchalattee said:

 

Sudah saya perbaharui sesuai dengan persyaratan.