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[CN] Rossa Kaloyanova to Lashawn Ortiz (Eroz)


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Posted (edited)

UCP Name: Eroz

Old Character: Rossa Kaloyanova

Old Character Story:

 

 


New Character: Lashawn Ortiz

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: United States of America

 


Reason for name change request:

Karena males jadi hode dan ingin coba join FnG dengan karakter bad guy.

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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CK Story:

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Two years after leaving San Andreas to travel across Europe and Asia, Rossa returned to San Andreas with no clear destination in mind. The city felt familiar yet strangely distant, as if the years had quietly erased the life she once knew. Her old bookstore had closed, former colleagues had moved away, and many of the friends she had once spent nights debating art and philosophy with had drifted into new lives. For days she wandered through Los Santos’s streets, revisiting cafés, parks, and galleries that had once been filled with laughter and conversation. Each place stirred memories of people who were no longer there, leaving her with a growing sense of isolation. Seeking comfort, she traveled back to The Panopticon, hoping the forests and villages of her childhood would restore the feeling of belonging she had lost.

One afternoon, Rossa walked alone along a quiet mountain trail overlooking the valleys of the Panopticon Mountains. The weather was pleasant, and the view of the rolling hills brought back memories of her childhood and the countless weekends she had spent there with old friends. Standing near a scenic overlook, she became lost in thought, reminiscing about the people who had once filled her life with laughter and companionship. The peaceful silence around her made her feel as though time had stopped. As she gazed across the landscape, unaware of her surroundings, two masked men dressed in gangster clothing emerged from behind a cluster of trees nearby. Both men carried handguns and quickly closed the distance, pointing their weapons directly at her. Startled and frightened, Rossa immediately demanded to know what they wanted. The men ordered her to hand over her belongings, but panic and adrenaline took over. Refusing to surrender without resistance, she attempted to fight back and push past them in an effort to escape.

The confrontation quickly turned violent. One of the masked men struck her, while the other kept his weapon trained on her. Despite being outnumbered, Rossa continued struggling, desperately trying to break free from the ambush. During the chaos, she managed to land a blow against one of her attackers, but the attempt only escalated the situation. A gunshot suddenly echoed through the mountains, followed by another. The bullets struck Rossa in the chest, causing her to collapse onto the ground. The attackers fled the scene moments later, disappearing into the forest and leaving her behind. Alone and gravely wounded, Rossa could do little more than stare at the sky above as her strength faded. With no one nearby to hear her cries for help, she eventually succumbed to her injuries. Her life came to an end on the very mountains that had once been her sanctuary, turning a journey of reflection and remembrance into a tragic and lonely final chapter.

 

CK Screenshots:

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Edited by Eroz
Fixing origin & screenshots
Posted

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

Posted
52 minutes ago, brainfreeze52 said:

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

1. Ya, sudah.

2. Ya, sudah.

3. Ya, sudah.

4. Pembunuhan.

5. Ya, sudah.

Posted
On 6/7/2026 at 11:02 PM, Eroz said:

Africa/America

Africa America itu RAS. yang diminta ORIGIN, jadi sebutkan NAMA NEGARA

 

On 6/7/2026 at 11:02 PM, Eroz said:

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Ini gambarnya kecil semua, tolong perbaiki, termasuk SS RP nya

Posted
1 jam yang lalu, brainfreeze52 said:

Africa America itu RAS. yang diminta ORIGIN, jadi sebutkan NAMA NEGARA

 

Maksud saya nama negara africa atau america dalam bahasa inggris. Kedua nama itu kan masih termasuk nama negara. All fixed nonetheless......

Posted

Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.

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