pending Luna_Mondrake [Dravenox]

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Luna Mondrake

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      In a quiet and peaceful town in United Kingdom called Wiltshire, a baby girl was born on 2004 and named Luna Mondrake. She was raised by her loving parents, Rick Mondrake and Poppy Mondrake, with one older brother named Julian Mondrake. Growing up, Luna was known as a genuinely nice and kind girl by everyone around her. She was well-behaved kid, had really good academic grades at school, and easily made a lot of friends because of her friendly and bright personality. Her family lived a decent and stable back then. Her parents worked hard to support the family, where they earned a living from working in the education sector and running a business in the clothing and textile industry. Everything seems perfect and normal for Mondrake family during Luna's early years in Wiltshire.

 

      As time went on, Mondrake family started to face financial struggles. Their clothing business was failing and almost completely bankrupt. This situation make Julian, who is Luna's older brother, had to take a part-time job right after he finished his school hours just to help pay family's bills. Luna helped Julian too when she turned 17 years old as she couldn't sit around and watch her family suffer. Rick, their father, suddenly abandoned the family and went missing without any explanation. This heartbreaking situation made Luna lose her way and feel completely lost, and secretly started smoking cigarettes and weed. However, she always managed to look like an innocent girl from outside.

 

      Their mother, Poppy, passed away that leaving Luna and Julian completely alone. Luna reached the breaking point, she worked together with Julian to start a secret, illegal business just to survive and make money. However, doing this in Wiltshire was way too risky, so they had a long discussion. Julian's friend, Nelson, told them a huge city across ocean called Los Santos, a place full of opportunities. Luna with his brother, Julian, packed their belongings and finally moved there together as duo, Mondrake Siblings. Luna hoped that in Los Santos would give them a much better life, or maybe drag them into an even darker one.

 

 

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Questions

Character Story Pertama: Yes

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun

URL Namechange: -

Account UCP yang saya miliki:

Dravenox

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
$Lore of Dravenox$

 

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Saya Lore of Dravenox selaku pemilik account UCP Dravenox bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Luna Mondrake) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

[Cata]

Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol  pada toolbar di atas.
3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
   Spoiler

   

    

 

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1 hour ago, Cata said:

Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

1. Tidak, tapi ya untuk char ini.

2. 1-2 tahun, sering pensi soalnya.

3. Charbaru.

4. Tidak, hanya ini. FYI, UCP Liann milik kakak saya, UCP Zhafirak itu milik sepupu saya yang mau buat UCP dan maen JGVRP (namun tidak jadi karena ada isu mau dishutdown Rockstar H+1 dia bikin UCP).

5. Tidak.

6. Di rumah.