pending Nasser_Abuyya [Mamapron]

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Nasser_Abuyya

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   August 22nd a child named Nasser Abuyya was born in a small town called Algoa Park Nasser was born in a simple family he was the youngest child in his family he had two older brothers and a sister, Nasser's father came from America and his mother came from South Africa when Nasser was 15 years old approaching adolescence Nasser's mother died of cancer and Nasser felt lost everything after two weeks of Nasser's mother's departure his father invited the family to move to America and to make Nasser forget the departure of his late mother, And Nasser also agreed to his father's invitation to fly to America when he arrived in America, Nasser's father advised him not to make a mess when he was in America he said with a smile, because Nasser was a child who caused a lot of trouble when he was in his previous town and when his mother left Nasser promised to be a good child and would make his father and mother proud.

 

   Four years later Nasser graduated from his school and he intended to continue his studies there but because of economic obstacles Nasser decided to work temporarily to save money so he could continue his studies, Nasser worked as a laborer in a paper factory and he had a friend named Keithra who was called Keith, who happened to be his senior in high school, they were both quite close, One day Keith invited Nasser to go for a walk and it happened that day they got leave, They intended to walk to the beach and enjoy the cool sea water and wind Nasser asked Keith for permission to go to the bathroom and Keith invited him when he went to the bathroom Nasser saw a woman being harassed by a group of people and Nasser intended to help her but the perpetrator's friend pointed a knife and threatened Nasser and told him to go, Nasser left without a word, Arriving at the place Nasser told Keith what he had just seen and they both intended to return to the scene when they arrived at the scene they only found the woman being harassed by a group of people and Nasser and Keith intended to approached the woman and the woman tried to avoid her, Keith shouted that they were not from the group and the woman believed Nasser and Keith and the woman told the chronology, Keith after hearing the story from the woman felt furious because Keith knew them and they had done the same thing with Keith's younger brother, Nasser also intended to help the woman and Keith and they looked for the whereabouts of the person they were looking for, it turned out that Nasser and his friends found them in a clothing store and Keith intended to attack them with a firearm that came from the trunk of his car but Nasser blocked Keith's intention, but Keith invited Nasser and the woman to make a plan for revenge.

 

   At night Keith and his friends intend to teach a lesson to the group that harassed Keith's sister and the woman who met him in the bathroom by inviting Keith's friends who happened to be a very disruptive group, but Nasser felt this plan was very dangerous because they would attack with sharp weapons but because Nasser felt that their treatment was very cruel and despicable, finally Nasser joined them at 21:47 Keith fired a shot that made Nasser stunned and the group ran while taking their respective weapons, Nasser also felt that this missed the initial plan Nasser intended to escape but Nasser was blocked by someone and planned to shoot Nasser, Keith helped Nasser by shooting the person who pointed a gun at Nasser, However Keith was hit by an attack from the enemy which made Keith die and Nasser witnessed the incident Nasser approached Keith and took his gun while shooting at the person who shot Keith, the police came and Nasser took Keith's body and took him to the hospital, unfortunately Keith was declared dead because the bullet lodged right in his chest and Keith was buried, two years passed Nasser had forgetting his past events and now he is living a normal life and he has reached the college that Nasser wanted.

 

 

 

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Questions

Character Story Pertama: Ya

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Kurang dari 1 bulan

URL Namechange:

Account UCP yang saya miliki:  Hanya satu yaitu Mamapron

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki: Mamapron

 

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Saya Mamapron selaku pemilik account UCP Mamapron bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Nasser_Abuyya) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited yesterday at 12:26 PM by Mamapron

[Succubus]

Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol  pada toolbar di atas.
3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
   Spoiler

   

    

 

[Mamapron]

15 jam yang lalu, Succubus said:

Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol  pada toolbar di atas.
3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
     Reveal hidden contents

   

    

 

1. Ya

2. Kurang dari 1 bulan

3. Buat baru

4. Tidak

5. Tidak

6.Dirumah

Edited Tuesday at 05:59 AM by Mamapron

[Succubus]

Mohon jawab pertanyaan saya dengan JUJUR

1. Dimana kamu bermain? (warnet/rumah)
2. Berapa akun UCP dan Forum yang kamu miliki? (sebut semua baik yang sudah dibanned ataupun inaktif)
3. Apakah kamu menggunakan bantuan AI dalam pembuatan character story ini?
4. Apabila jawaban yang kamu berikan berbohong, apakah kamu siap untuk menerima konsekuensinya?

[Mamapron]

10 jam yang lalu, Succubus said:

Mohon jawab pertanyaan saya dengan JUJUR

1. Dimana kamu bermain? (warnet/rumah)
2. Berapa akun UCP dan Forum yang kamu miliki? (sebut semua baik yang sudah dibanned ataupun inaktif)
3. Apakah kamu menggunakan bantuan AI dalam pembuatan character story ini?
4. Apabila jawaban yang kamu berikan berbohong, apakah kamu siap untuk menerima konsekuensinya?

1.dirumah

2.Cuma Mamapron

3.Tidak murni ketikan sendiri

4.saya jujur 

[Succubus]

Jogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @Mamapron,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, I have reviewed your character story and as a result, I come to the decision to PENDING your character story based on the following reasons:

1. Buat menjadi rata kiri-kanan (justify)
2. Gunakan tanda baca dan ejaan yang baik dan benar
3. Gunakan bahasa asli, bukan serapan/slang (sesuai dengan bahasa utama pilihan English/Indonesia)
4. Jangan gunakan bantuan AI

I hope that you can correct the mistakes mentioned above so that I may approve your character story.

 

Sincerely,
@Succubus
JG:RP Helper Team

[Mamapron]

12 jam yang lalu, Succubus said:

Jogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @Mamapron,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, I have reviewed your character story and as a result, I come to the decision to PENDING your character story based on the following reasons:

1. Buat menjadi rata kiri-kanan (justify)
2. Gunakan tanda baca dan ejaan yang baik dan benar
3. Gunakan bahasa asli, bukan serapan/slang (sesuai dengan bahasa utama pilihan English/Indonesia)
4. Jangan gunakan bantuan AI

I hope that you can correct the mistakes mentioned above so that I may approve your character story.

 

Sincerely,
@Succubus
JG:RP Helper Team

Sudah saya ubah min silahkan dicek kembali maaf tag @Succubus

[Succubus]

21 hours ago, Mamapron said:

Buat menjadi rata kiri-kanan (justify)

biasakan membaca dengan teliti.

[Mamapron]

6 jam yang lalu, Succubus said:

biasakan membaca dengan teliti.

maaf min, sudah saya ubah mohon dikoreksi lagi min

 

[Succubus]

Jawab dengan JUJUR

UdinBaik ucp siapa?

[Mamapron]

9 jam yang lalu, Succubus said:

Jawab dengan JUJUR

UdinBaik ucp siapa?

Tidak tau min, Ucp saya cuma mamapron

[Succubus]

yakin?

[Mamapron]

44 minutes ago, Succubus said:

yakin?

Yakin min