$dreadmonarch$ Posted Sunday at 03:34 PM Posted Sunday at 03:34 PM UCP Name: pelu444 Old Character: Elias Atchakos Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/305497-elias_atchakos-pelu444/ New Character: Cheon Jiwoon Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: South Korea Reason for name change request: ingin mengubah alur roleplay dan mencoba suasana baru Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti OOC Jail Spoiler /myid Spoiler /mp Spoiler CK Story: Spoiler Elias Atchakos made his way back to the old gathering place with a quiet heaviness in his chest, the kind that settles in when a place once full of life has slowly been left behind. It had once been where his people came together to pray for protection, to speak to one another, and to hold onto the traditions that kept them grounded, but now the visits had become rare and the silence had grown louder than the memories. Elias stood there for a while, looking over the worn ground and the familiar surroundings, feeling the distance between what had been and what remained. There was still meaning in the place, still a kind of sacred weight in the air, but it was different now, almost forgotten by the very people who once depended on it. After spending some time there, he left with a restless mind, driving aimlessly through the streets in search of somewhere to sit down, breathe, and let the day pass without thinking too much about it. Eventually, Elias found a bar that seemed quiet enough to disappear into for a little while. He parked, went inside, and ordered a drink, hoping the warm noise of the room and the steady burn of alcohol would help ease the tension that had been following him all day. For a moment, it worked. He sat there alone, taking slow sips and letting the world blur around the edges. But that calm was short-lived. A group of hillbillies in the bar noticed him, and the atmosphere shifted almost immediately. What started as sideways glances soon turned into open remarks, then into crude, hateful words about his ethnicity, his heritage, and his place in the world. They mocked him for being Native American, spat out nonsense about land ownership, and kept repeating slogans about “making America great again” as though their bitterness somehow gave their words power. Elias tried to ignore them at first, staring into his drink and telling himself that it was not worth the trouble, but the insults kept coming, each one sharper and more deliberate than the last, until the tension in the room became impossible to ignore. In the end, Elias stood up and reached for his guns, not with the intention of starting a slaughter, but with the hope that showing he was not afraid would be enough to make them back off. For a brief second, it seemed like the moment might break in his favor, but the men in front of him were not drunk fools looking for a fight that they were prepared. The first shot hit Elias in the torso, knocking the breath out of him and sending him stumbling backward as pain tore through his body. He tried to steady himself, tried to make sense of what was happening, but the next move came too fast. Another shot rang out, this time to the head, and the room fell into a terrible kind of stillness as Elias collapsed. Sirens were already beginning to wail somewhere in the distance, but they were too far away to matter. The hillbillies scattered and fled before anyone could stop them, leaving the bar behind in chaos and silence. Elias Atchakos died there on the scene, alone beneath the weight of disrespect, violence, and a world that had failed to protect the place and the people he had once tried so hard to remember. CK Screenshots: Bukti
Jack_Robinson Posted Monday at 06:46 AM Posted Monday at 06:46 AM Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
$dreadmonarch$ Posted Monday at 06:49 AM Author Posted Monday at 06:49 AM Just now, Jack_Robinson said: Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC. 1. sudah 2. sudah 3. sudah 4. penembakan yang berakhir kematian 5. sudah
Jack_Robinson Posted Monday at 11:40 AM Posted Monday at 11:40 AM Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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