Rayfell Posted May 26 Posted May 26 (edited) Ariel Mckenna Ariel Mckenna was born on April 15, 2000, in a neighborhood in Philadelphia that contains many old buildings and a high rate of crime. In this environment, he learned at an early age that individuals must work to obtain what they need. Because he lived in an area where residents have low to moderate incomes, his early years lacked expensive items but the persistence of the local workers, the sound of the SEPTA buses, the scent of small restaurants and the many large paintings on public walls characterized his surroundings. By stretching every dollar to pay for their needs, his family showed him how to use available materials effectively. As a result of those conditions, he developed strong skills for surviving in difficult situations while he was still very young. If he lacked certain items, he did not express dissatisfaction. He spent his time walking on the public paths of the city. On the walks he observed the broken concrete of the sidewalks and he looked at the world exactly as it appears. When Ariel became twenty years old, he decided that his lack of wealth would not limit his future achievements. He lived as an adult who acted without help from others. To pay for his needs, he worked at many different temporary jobs in Philadelphia. At the same time he developed his personal goals in private. If he worked during the night or talked with people in his neighborhood, he acted in a calm way and watched others carefully. On the days when he was not working, he sat on the stairs of houses made of brick. In those moments he wrote his ideas in a used book or listened to the loud noises of the city. Because his family had little money, he did not feel angry but the difficulties made him believe that good things happen. For Ariel, every problem is a reason to improve himself. As a young man Ariel adapts to a world that changes rapidly he has developed a personality that is reliable and consistent. It is clear to him that his value depends on how he recovers from difficulties, how he maintains his allegiances and how he remains connected to his origins while he pursues professional advancement. For Ariel, the acquisition of wealth is a goal but he does not pursue it if it requires him to sacrifice his honesty or his authentic relationships. He looks toward the time ahead without feelings of worry. He observes his future with the calm and firm focus of a person from Philadelphia. To him the ability to handle future challenges is certain because he knows how to endure through hardships. Questions Character Story Pertama: Yes Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Kurang dari 1 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: wijayakusuma Account Forum yang saya miliki: @Rayfell Saya Rayfell selaku pemilik account UCP wijayakusuma bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Ariel Mckenna) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited May 27 by Rayfell Photo
Lixzyyyyy Posted May 26 Posted May 26 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
Rayfell Posted May 26 Author Posted May 26 Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Ya Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Kurang dari 1 bulan Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Buat baru Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Tidak ada Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Tidak ada Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) Warnet
Lixzyyyyy Posted May 27 Posted May 27 Picture/gambar pada Character Stories kamu tolong diupload ulang, tidak kelihatan. Disarankan upload lewat imgur.com
Rayfell Posted May 27 Author Posted May 27 21 minutes ago, Lixzyyyyy said: Picture/gambar pada Character Stories kamu tolong diupload ulang, tidak kelihatan. Disarankan upload lewat imgur.com Sudah saya ganti melalui imgur, tolong dicek kembali, mksh
Lixzyyyyy Posted May 28 Posted May 28 Mohon dijawba secara jujur. Apakah kamu mempunyai UCP lain selain UCP yang kamu gunakan saat ini?
Rayfell Posted May 28 Author Posted May 28 6 hours ago, Lixzyyyyy said: Mohon dijawba secara jujur. Apakah kamu mempunyai UCP lain selain UCP yang kamu gunakan saat ini? Tidak ada, hanya ini saja
Lixzyyyyy Posted May 28 Posted May 28 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Rayfell, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Lixzyyyyy JG:RP Helper Team
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