LyzerX Posted May 21 Posted May 21 UCP Name: LyzerX Old Character: Gavin Lim Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/375624-gavin_lim-lyzerx/#comment-3821719 New Character: Radim Dolecek Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: Russia Reason for name change request: Ingin mengubah alur Roleplay. New toon, new grind. Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti OOC Jail /myid /mp CK Story: Spoiler Late at night, Gavin was cruising around Los Santos on his favorite BMX. The kid was known for being a straight-up troublemaker, always getting into street fights and having run-ins with the law. When a bright morning hit Los Santos and the sun started shining, Gavin was just waking up. He had stayed out late again, which was a bad habit that always got him into trouble with his aunt for oversleeping. That morning, Gavin was supposed to head to work, but he just sat on the bench outside his house, spacing out until the day was half gone. He checked his phone, realized he was way behind schedule, and started pedaling his bike like crazy toward his job. Gavin worked as a laborer over in El Corona, and he was pushing that bike to the limit. When he finally showed up, he was late again. His boss, who was completely fed up with his excuses, told him to just go home. Gavin was heated at himself for messing up. To make things worse, when he got back to his bike, the chain had snapped. He fixed it up and kept moving, stopping at a spot in Idlewood to grab some food and a drink because he was starving. After eating, he headed back home. His aunt was there asking why he was back so early. Gavin told her the truth, and she went off on him for his behavior. She started talking about his late father, saying Gavin was acting just like him disobeying the rules and being a rebel. His dad had passed away when Gavin was only ten, a victim of a violent encounter in the Temple area on his way home from the Casino. To this day, the person responsible remains unknown, though everyone believes it was the work of a criminal syndicate in Los Santos. After hearing that story, Gavin stepped outside to clear his head for a bit. He walked over to his favorite car, one he rarely ever used, and noticed it was covered in dust. He started cleaning the body of the car. While he was working, a middle-aged guy pulled up on a Harley Davidson. Gavin approached him, and the two started trading insults. A few nights before, Gavin and his crew were hanging out in East Los Santos when they saw a pack of Harleys rolling by. Gavin followed them to their destination and witnessed an illegal transaction. He decided to call the authorities, leading to a raid by the police and SWAT. However, some individuals escaped, and one had spotted Gavin on the phone. It turned out the man standing in front of him was one of those individuals. The confrontation escalated rapidly, and the man produced a weapon. Gavin attempted to flee but was overtaken. The encounter resulted in a fatal outcome for Gavin, and he passed away that very night. News of the tragedy spread fast through Los Santos. CK Screenshots: Bukti
brainfreeze52 Posted May 22 Posted May 22 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
brainfreeze52 Posted May 23 Posted May 23 Untuk alur cerita kematian karakter kamu, minimal penyebab kematian karena benda tajam, bukan benda tumpul. Silakan perbaiki cerita dan beberapa screenshot RP yang terakhir.
LyzerX Posted May 25 Author Posted May 25 Sudah min, boleh dikoreksi lagi jika ada yang perlu di revisi kembali.
brainfreeze52 Posted May 26 Posted May 26 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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