Reggi Purnomo Posted April 26 Posted April 26 (edited) UCP Name: nathanmd Old Character: Jose Victor Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/175249-jose_victor-nathanmd/ New Character: Elvena Delaney Gender: Perempuan (Female) Origin: United Kingdom Reason for name change request: Ingin menghapus catatan kriminal. Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti OOC Jail /myid /mp CK Story: Spoiler Jose Victor, a man living by himself in a flat, suddenly jolted awake from a nightmare, Jose always struggled to sleep peacefully because he couldn't stop thinking about his past memories that keep haunting him, his mind slowly tearing him apart from the inside. knowing things couldn't go on and on like this, he decided to take a drive around the city hoping that driving around and enjoying the city view would help him forget his past. About 30 minutes in, he suddenly slammed on his brakes in the middle of the road when as his past in his mind creep back in, frustrated and desperate he spotted a bar nearby and he thought that a single drink would quiet the noise in his mind, he walked in and ordered a bottle of whiskey his first time ever buying one and drink until he started hallucinating. When Jose was really drunk, Jose spotted a man in a green shirt named James who was just ordering a drink, but in Jose's mind James was the guy who had ruined his business in the past, Jose started going off on him by yelling and cursing him out in front of people, James completely confused and pissed off he felt humilliated then he yelled back by roasting Jose's appearance by saying that he looked like a pizza delivery guy , Jose was too drunk didn't even realize he started the whole thing didn't hesitate and slapped James hard on the face. the Bartender who was serving the other costumer noticed and kicked both of them out of the bar, because there were some people watching them making James can't do too much, he was burning with rage swear he would find Jose somewhere and make him pay for it no matter where he was. In the afternoon of the next day, Jose apparently felt better that the past always haunting him had finally gone out of his head. while he was out picking up some berries near the same bar he heard a car slowly pulling up behind him, but unfortunately for Jose it was James who still mad about what he had done last night, James got out of his car and started going in on him , but Jose had no memory of what happened the night before and genuinely had no idea what James was talking about, James was convinced Jose was lying and playing dumb and no matter how much Jose insisted he didn't remember, but James wasn't giving a damn he fed up and still fumming over the whole humilliation that night, James reached into his car and pulled out a shotgun then he aimed it straight at Jose's head, Jose begged him to not shoot him, James blinded by anger over the whole humilliating that Jose had done he pulled the trigger without a second thought, making Jose died right at the scene. James was realizing what he had just done and knowing the cops would be coming, he fleed the scene with his car as fast as he can. CK Screenshots: Bukti Edited April 28 by Reggi Purnomo
FilthyKikz Posted April 28 Posted April 28 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
Reggi Purnomo Posted April 28 Author Posted April 28 5 hours ago, FilthyKikz said: Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? 1. Sudah 2. Sudah 3. Sudah 4. Pembunuhan berencana 5. Sudah
FilthyKikz Posted April 29 Posted April 29 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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