$Reza17$ Posted February 9 Posted February 9 UCP Name: adyasadara Old Character: Raghael Curbelo Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/366416-raghael_curbelo-adyasadara/ New Character: Harry Ferrano Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: United State Of America Reason for name change request: -Ingin mengganti alur roleplay Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti OOC JAIL /MYID /MP CK Story: Spoiler One afternoon there was Raghael who was about to rush home using a freeway vehicle, on the way he often made himself look very discouraged because he saw that he had worked for a long time, but the income did not match what he did. On every trip he always daydreamed because he saw such a big responsibility only for himself, because he no longer had a small family, his wife and children had long left him, because he saw Raghael who was inconsistent with his work, Raghael's father and mother had also died a long time ago due to experiencing the illness that his parents had experienced for so long, but Raghael still accepted what had happened, his children and wife also had families, and Raghael only looked at it with acceptance. After several hours of passing through Las Colinas, he was now almost at his home, which was located right on top of the hill in Las Colinas. The atmosphere around his house was quite calm, because at that time the people around him were going to work. Only Raghael was rushing home because his work hours were not too long. After a few minutes of parking his vehicle, he saw someone coming with a black bag on his back. After seeing the person, the person immediately pulled out a shotgun and pointed it at Raghael. Raghael panicked because he saw the person threatening to use a firearm. Because it only looked threatening, he thought about not shooting, considering that the area around his house was surrounded by quite dense houses. At that moment, Raghael immediately turned and ran as fast as he could. Without saying anything, the person immediately shot Raghael in the back. After the incident, he took Raghael's body to the back of the house, took the remaining items, then left Raghael who had been killed right behind his house. CK Screenshots: Bukti
Pakuwo Posted February 10 Posted February 10 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
$Reza17$ Posted February 10 Author Posted February 10 1 jam yang lalu, Pakuwo said: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? Sudah. Sudah. Sudah. Dirampok, lalu ditembak hingga tewas saat melarikan diri. Sudah.
Pakuwo Posted February 10 Posted February 10 9 minutes ago, Sadara said: Sudah. Sudah. Sudah. Dirampok, lalu ditembak hingga tewas saat melarikan diri. Sudah. Paragraf ketiga ditambah lagi.
Pakuwo Posted February 10 Posted February 10 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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