jack_robinson [CN] Timothy Foltz to Agnes Peterson (deananugerah)

[$deananugerah$]

UCP Name: deananugerah

Old Character: Timothy Foltz

Old Character Story:

https://jogjagamers.org/topic/322567-timothy_foltz-deananugerah/#comment-3225429

 

 

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New Character: Agnes Peterson

Gender: Perempuan (Female)

Origin: Pennsylvania, USA

 

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Reason for name change request:

Ingin mengganti alur Roleplay dan ingin beroleplay sebagai karakter wanita

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

Bukti

 

 

 

CK Story:

Spoiler

One day, Timothy Foltz, who had been dishonorably discharged from SAFD, began to pack his things to go to San Fierro to meet his last remaining family member, his aunt Rebecca. He ordered a taxi and started walking towards San Fierro while looking at photos of his wife and children on his phone. He cried a little while imagining the shame and fear of meeting his wife and children. During the trip, Foltz remembered every moment with the SAFD and the tragic incident that happened to him a few weeks ago that resulted in him having to languish in prison for several months.

Arriving in San Fierro, Foltz walked along the sidewalk and headed to a bicycle rental place. He rented a bike and began pedaling to Rebecca's address, which was not far from there. After about 30 minutes of travel, he climbed the hills and arrived at Rebecca's house. He parked the bike neatly in front of the house and began walking to the doorbell. Not long after, a middle-aged woman opened the door and was surprised by Foltz's presence. Rebecca appeared, asking what brought Foltz all the way here from Los Santos. Foltz told everything, including his ruined career. Rebecca could only calm Foltz down. However, not long after the conversation, a jingle was heard from the package delivery man to Rebecca's house. Foltz took the initiative to take the package, while Rebecca went to the bathroom. Foltz took the package that Rebecca had, a box wrapped in bubble wrap.

Not long after the scene, a pink sultan car approached Rebecca's residence. He seemed to be watching Foltz's movements. Foltz felt something was wrong with his condition, he looked towards the sultan's car. Not long after he was off guard, the car approached him. A woman got out while reading a sawn-off shotgun and gave him a threat while pointing her gun at Foltz. Then Foltz could only be shocked by the incident, he was scared and surprised by the woman's actions. He asked what she wanted and was ready to give her anything she wanted. Then not long after the woman received a call from her group to hurry, then the robber immediately robbed Foltz's luggage and money. After that, the woman ran away towards the car and immediately Foltz made a rather blundering action by calling 911 to report to the police. Unbeknownst to him, it turned out that the robber realized what Foltz was doing, then he returned towards Foltz and threatened Foltz if he dared to mess around and report the police. Foltz was terrified and without further ado the woman shot Foltz brutally until he was dying. At this point, Foltz could only apologize to his wife and declare that he was returning home. That is, returning to God's place, the eternal place. After Foltz died, the woman dragged his body and carried it down a narrow alley, where she threw it at the trash bin.

And Timothy Foltz has officially passed away in a tragic way.

 

CK Screenshots:

Bukti

 

 

[Jack_Robinson]

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

[$deananugerah$]

1. Sudah, saya sudah membuat story CK berdasarkan ketentuan yang ada.
2. Sudah, saya melampirkan 14 Screenshot untuk proses CK
3. Sudah, pada /mp saya sudah kosong dan tidak terdapat property apapun.
4. Saya melakukan sebuah roleplay sebagai korban perampokan/penjarahan yang berujung pada kematian karakter.
5. Sudah, karakter saya sudah dalam kondisi jail admin.

 

Note : Saya memohon izin agar Origin saya dapat disetujui sebagai "Pennsylvania, USA" karena ada perencanaan untuk penguatan cerita karakter dan alur roleplay berkesinambungan dengan daerah asalnya (origin) dari karakter saya tersebut. Terima kasih banyak sebelumnya.

[Jack_Robinson]

Accepted, Silahkan tunggu Administrator 1 + untuk Changename

[Ooxy]

16 jam yang lalu, deananugerah said:

New Character: Agnes Wright

Terindikasi famous name, tolong diganti.

[$deananugerah$]

1 jam yang lalu, Ooxy said:

Terindikasi famous name, tolong diganti.

Sudah saya update ya kak @Ooxy

terima kasih

[Ooxy]

Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.