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Luis_Gloria [Axellav]


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Luis_Gloria


 

 

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On July 3, 2007, in Ganton, a child named Luis Gloria was born. Luis has lived on the street since childhood, he looks for food by eating food that has been thrown away and occasionally there are good people who give him a little money to buy food but when he wants to buy food he is always rejected because he is considered disgusting by some people there he always asks himself why everyone doesn't like me what's wrong with me because of his emotions he took a glass bottle and threw it at the shopkeeper then ran as far as possible until he met a child who had the same fate as him Luis approached and asked to get to know the child's name was Damian. while chatting with Damian he asked how to get a lot of money and food Damian just laughed and told Luis to follow him until he arrived at a place Luis asked why we went to a place like this Damian just told him and pay attention and a few minutes later there was someone carrying a bag containing food, Damian told Luis to just watch what he was doing, Damian walked slowly behind the person and immediately took the bag and ran then hid Luis who saw this was just silent and couldn't believe what his friend was doing. until a few moments Damian approached Luis with the bag containing food and a little money, Damian shared some food and they ate heartily until it was already night Luis said goodbye to Damian to return to his place and Damian said if you are looking for me come here again, he said okay.

 

The next day when he went to the place where he met yesterday, he didn't find Damian there, so he looked for him for several minutes and asked people around who might know Damian, but without any results, maybe because he was too tired, he decided to return to where he usually slept., until a newspaper flew towards him and there was news of a thief who was shot dead while trying to steal money from someone's bag, Luis who read the news thought maybe it was Damian, but Luis did not think too much about it maybe it was someone else

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Several years have passed now Luis has forgotten Damian and now Luis is 18 years old and now he lives with a young man named Brayan who invited him to live with him and invited him to play with his friends they talked about how hard he used to be all that lasted quite a long time until it was too late it was time to go home and rest and don't forget to say goodbye to Brayan's friends. when they got home they got ready to rest. until the next day when they were hanging out with Brayan's friends suddenly a group of people shot at us and a shootout occurred between Brayan's friends and the group of people which resulted in the death of Brayan and one of his friends. The sadness of Luis and his friends Brayan who swore to take revenge, arrived at Brayan's funeral to pay their last respects they immediately went to the place where the group of people were. Upon arrival there they immediately opened fire on the group of people without mercy until there were no remains, after that they left and went straight home each, Luis who had returned home looked at Brayan's photo and said that revenge had been avenged

 

 


 

Questions

Character Story Pertama: No

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 - 6 bulan

URL Namechange:

 

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Axellav

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

Axellav


 

Saya Axellav selaku pemilik account UCP Axellav bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Luis_Gloria) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited by Axellav
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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (BoldItalic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
    Spoiler

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  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? tidak
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP?  kurang lebih 4 - 6 bulan
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? namechange
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? Tidak
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? Tidak
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? Di rumah
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Saya ajukan beberapa pertanyaan dibawah, dan harap dijawab dengan JUJUR.

  1. Apakah kamu memiliki UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? Jika ada, sebutkan semuanya.
  2. Apakah kamu menggunakan bantuan AI untuk membuat Character Story ini?
  3. Apakah kamu menyontek atau copy paste milik Character Story orang lain?
  4. Apakah kamu sudah membuat 300 kata pada Character Story ini?
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  1. Apakah kamu memiliki UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? Jika ada, sebutkan semuanya. tidak ada
  2. Apakah kamu menggunakan bantuan AI untuk membuat Character Story ini? tidak
  3. Apakah kamu menyontek atau copy paste milik Character Story orang lain? tidak saya yang menulisnya sendiri
  4. Apakah kamu sudah membuat 300 kata pada Character Story ini? sudah
Edited by Axellav
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Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @Axellav,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@Etherneum
JG:RP Helper Team

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