vermouth [CN] Tocho_Benquasha to Bricio_Phokas (Jack_Robinson)

[Jack_Robinson]

UCP Name: Jack_Robinson

Old Character: Tocho_Benquasha

Old Character Story:

https://jogjagamers.org/topic/316617-tocho_benquasha-jack_robinson/?do=findComment&comment=3150293

 

 

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New Character: Bricio_Phokas

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: Florida, America

 

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Reason for name change request:

Ingin merubah alur roleplay.

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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OOC JAIL

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/myid

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/mp 

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CK Story:

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That night, Tocho wanted to buy food at a restaurant in the marina and hoped he would meet his friends there. When he arrived there, he did not find his friends but he was amazed by the beauty of the restaurant he visited. It didn't take long for Tocho to enter the restaurant and buy some food and drinks, the food and drinks there were very delicious. Tocho didn't stay there too long because he wanted to go around the city of Los Santos after a long time he hadn't been around the city. Tocho got out of the restaurant and got into the car to continue his journey to Missionary Hill, in the middle of the trip, Tocho heard a very loud crash from outside his car. Without realizing it, Tocho hit a

 

Sanchez motorcyclist who was stopped. Tocho immediately got out of his car and approached Soensor, Soensor was very upset because he was hit by Tocho, because the position of his vehicle was stopped and did not interfere with road users. Without thinking, Soensor gave Tocho several punches until he fell to the ground. Tocho, who was starting to get annoyed, threw harsh words at Soensor,
Soensor ignored Tocho's words and immediately left the scene of the collision. Tocho immediately chased after Soensor who had left

because he was also starting to get annoyed with Soensor's behavior towards him. Soensor's motorbike was ticketed by Tocho, Tocho immediately got out of his car and kicked Soensor off his motorbike until he fell. When kicked, Soensor was very annoyed and he also told that he was annoyed with Tocho's treatment from the beginning of the collision until Soensor was kicked off his motorbike until he fell, Soensor immediately pointed a gun at Tocho's head and shot Tocho to death.

 

CK Screenshots:

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[Vermouth]

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

[Jack_Robinson]

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Sudah
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Sudah
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Sudah
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Balas dendam.
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? sudah

[Vermouth]

Storynya belum 300 kata, silahkan tambahkan terlebih dahulu.

[Jack_Robinson]

Sudah 300 kata pas, silahkan di cek kembali.

[Vermouth]

Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.