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Character: Dushane Boufford

Origin: United States of America

Story:

 

Dushane Boufford is an African-American was born on the 7th of January in 2001 inside of Los Santos, his family lived within one of the notorious hood areas within Los Santos otherwise known as Idlewood complex. Dushane's mother owned a house down at 302nd Garcia Street, he is raised by a single mother due to their parents' divorce while Dushane was young. Several months, and he lost his father to cancer when he was thirteen, and his mother died of cancer when he was 14 going on 15 - and he were put in foster homes but he was not at all comfortable, he also went out through the wall which is quite high.


In early June, he started living on the street. He knew close with Benjamin Banks, he was taught him up to be a tough guy, he chose to join the gang because all of his friends were getting involved with school with and playing sports with the neighborhood. Dushane's uncle tried to get him involved with camps instead but he said, he would always make his way back to his alley. A clique from Ganton is coming to offering some illegal stuff, they got a nice relationship, he is knew close with Sean Hampton is known as Big-Sean, when the MLK' street is a get slumped down and Bemin got arrested by the police, he just really wanted to be alone, that's when Big-Sean said "Man, come on the street yo", they approached him at the street. They knew his parents were dead and they started to hang out with him and made him feel good. He actually wanted to join because he is felt that he would have more power in Crip gang. Nobody could hurt him if he was one of them.

 

On 27th August, himself and his friends has been thrust into various illegal goods by Sean to fill a variety of needs in the notorious hood areas, in fact he did things he shouldn't have done for minors "Involved in a gang warfare" , he was reported to the police units by the residents about the complex. Witnesses reported him in a lot of things the witness didn't accept because he had killed witness' son, at last he got tangled seven months in prison but was given a relief because he was still under age.

 

 

 

 

Saya Pandaa selaku pemilik account UCP dias12321 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Dushane Boufford) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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To Mr/Ms Boufford / PANDAA,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:
  1. You should ensure that your story already fit-in with the requirements for paragraph.
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    He is started living on the street.

    I think you don't need to add "is" after your subject, for the past tense, it could be like: "S + V2 + O" > He started living on the street / he stayed living on the street. Whether it's an irregular or regular verbs.

I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Javanicus66,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team.



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On 12/21/2018 at 10:23 AM, Javanicus66 said:
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To Mr/Ms Boufford / PANDAA,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:
  1. You should ensure that your story already fit-in with the requirements for paragraph.
  2. I think you don't need to add "is" after your subject, for the past tense, it could be like: "S + V2 + O" > He started living on the street / he stayed living on the street. Whether it's an irregular or regular verbs.

I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Javanicus66,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team.



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Hi,

Saya telah mereview character story kamu dan menemukan bahwa story kamu sudah memenuhi kriteria yang kami berikan. Dengan itu kami telah ACCEPT character story yang kamu buat. Mohon ikuti panduan di bawah ini untuk mengaktifkan character story kamu:

 

 

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Please, confirm agreement UCP site

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kok saya ga bisa apply di ucp ya link nya?

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Just now, Japang™ said:

 

pake underscore pak

sudah pak, tq

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