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Character: Nasept_Alkev

Story:

 

Character Name: Nasept Alkev

Origin: Rusian.

Story :

            Nasept adalah anak dari Erma dan Alkev dia lahir pada tanggal 20 september 1993, dia biasa dipanggil oleh orang tuanya dengan sebutan Sept, sejak kecil Nasept sudah di suruh kerja keras, demi memenuhi kebutuhan sehari-hari karena orang tua dia sering sakit dan tidak bisa melakukan kerja keras lagi, dia setiap hari banting tulang untuk memenuhi kebutuhan sehari-hari keluarga, akan tetapi orang tua Nasept ingin dia berhasil dan tidak menjadi seperti mereka, karena motivasi dari mereka Nasept bisa terus maju.

 

 

           Setelah dia berumur 18 tahun ayah Nasept meninggal karena menderita penyakit kanker paru-paru, pada saat itu nasib dia menjadi suram serta ekonomi keluarga terus-menerus menurun dan ibu dia juga dalam sakit parah, pada suatu saat  ibu Nasept mendapatkan penyakit yang sangat parah serta perlu dibawa ke rumah sakit ternama yang ada di Moskwa, tetapi dia tidak mempunyai uang untuk membayar pengobatan, lalu dia memutuskan untuk ke kota Los Santos di Amerika Serikat demi membayar pengobatan ibunya yang sangat besar, awalnya dia di kota Los Santos tidak tahu apa-apa sama sekali serta tidak memiliki tempat tinggal.

 

          Pada Suatu saat Nasept mendapatkan teman yang bernama Sean Lombiani, dia menemani Nasept selama di Los Santos serta dia mengajak Nasept untuk tinggal bersama dia untuk sementara ini, tetapi pada saat Nasept berumur 21 Tahun Sean meninggal karena kecelakaan serta Nasept kembali mengalami nasib yang begitu suram lagi, setelah berapa lama Nasept disana dia belum mendapatkan pekerjaan tetap, akan tetapi dia tidak mudah putus asa. Pada suatu saat Nasept mendapatkan berita bahwa salah satu perusahaan terbesar se-Los Santos membutuhkan pekerja di bidang Security, lalu Nasept mencoba mendaftar disana dengan beberapa tahap yang cukup sulit, karena semangat Nasept akhirnya diterima kerja di perusahaan tersebut yang bernama House of Foundation. 

 

         Setelah sekian lamanya bekerja di perusahaan House of Foundation, kondisi ekonomi Nasept mulai membaik serta akhirnya pembiayaan orang tuanya yang ada di Rusia sudah selesai, karena orang tuanya melihat Nasept berhasil dia sangat bangga, serta Nasept juga berterima kasih sebanyak - banyak nya kepada orang tuanya yang mendidik dirinya dari kecil hingga dia besar, setelah beberapa tahun di Los Santos Nasept mempunyai rumah yang dibilang cukup sederhana tetapi kaya akan makna nya. 

 

Saya Nauval_Alpen Selaku pemilik account UCP Nauval Alpen bersedia jika character saya yang di sebut di atas (Nasept Alken) dibanned permanent jika story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

 

 

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To Mr/Ms Nauval Alpen,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

  1. Cek kriteria pembuatan Character Story,
  2. Setelah tanda baca " , . " berikan spasi, (contoh: kamu, dia dan aku)
  3. Dan penempatan tanda baca yang salah.


I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

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To Mr/Ms Nauval Alpen,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

  1. Gunakan sudut pandang orang ketiga dalam membuat Character Story, ganti dengan DIA, bukan saya ataupun aku lengkapnya kamu searching Google.


I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

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Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team

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28 minutes ago, khazet146 said:

To Mr/Ms Nauval Alpen,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

  1. Gunakan sudut pandang orang ketiga dalam membuat Character Story.


I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Helper khazet146,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team

@khazet146 Edited mohon diperiksa bang

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To Mr/Ms Nauval Alpen,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

  1. Gunakan sudut pandang orang ketiga dalam membuat Character Story, ganti dengan DIA, bukan saya ataupun aku lengkapnya kamu searching Google.


I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Helper khazet146,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team

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10 hours ago, khazet146 said:

To Mr/Ms Nauval Alpen,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

  1. Gunakan sudut pandang orang ketiga dalam membuat Character Story, ganti dengan DIA, bukan saya ataupun aku lengkapnya kamu searching Google.


I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Helper khazet146,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team

@khazet146 Edited min,Mohon diperiksa kembali biar kalau ada yang salah bisa saya perbaiki.

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To Mr/Ms Nauval Alpen,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

  1. Penempatan tanda baca yang masih salah.


I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Helper khazet146,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team

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41 minutes ago, khazet146 said:

To Mr/Ms Nauval Alpen,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

  1. Penempatan tanda baca yang masih salah.


I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Helper khazet146,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team

@khazet146 Edited min.

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To Mr/Ms Nauval Alpen,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

  1. Penempatan tanda baca yang masih salah
  2. dan setelah tanda " . " gunakan huruf besar, karena awalan kalimat baru.


I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Helper khazet146,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team

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7 minutes ago, khazet146 said:

To Mr/Ms Nauval Alpen,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

  1. Penempatan tanda baca yang masih salah
  2. dan setelah tanda " . " gunakan huruf besar, karena awalan kalimat baru.


I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Helper khazet146,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team

@khazet146 Edited min,kalau penempatan tanda baca yang salah itu sudah saya edit,tapi kalau masih salah tolong di beri tahu min,Makasih.

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To Mr/Ms Nauval Alpen,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

  1. Penempatan tanda baca yang masih salah, (contoh: Aku ganteng tetapi miskin, gausah dikasih titik, itu masih satu kalimat)
  2. dan setelah tanda " . " gunakan huruf besar, karena awalan kalimat baru. 


I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Helper khazet146,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team

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21 minutes ago, khazet146 said:

To Mr/Ms Nauval Alpen,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

  1. Penempatan tanda baca yang masih salah, (contoh: Aku ganteng tetapi miskin, gausah dikasih titik, itu masih satu kalimat)
  2. dan setelah tanda " . " gunakan huruf besar, karena awalan kalimat baru. 


I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Helper khazet146,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team

@khazet146 Edited min,mohon diperiksa kembali min.

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To Mr/Ms Nauval Alpen,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

  1. Penempatan tanda baca yang masih salah, (contoh: Aku ganteng tetapi miskin, gausah dikasih titik, itu masih satu kalimat)
  2. dan typo (ada beberapa penulisan yang salah)


I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Helper khazet146,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team

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20 minutes ago, khazet146 said:

To Mr/Ms Nauval Alpen,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

  1. Penempatan tanda baca yang masih salah, (contoh: Aku ganteng tetapi miskin, gausah dikasih titik, itu masih satu kalimat)
  2. dan typo (ada beberapa penulisan yang salah)


I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Helper khazet146,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team

@khazet146 Edited min,mohon diperiksa kembali kalau ada kesalahan lagi

 

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