papiloz Posted September 16, 2022 Posted September 16, 2022 Morello_Perez Morello Perez Morello, often known as' LowGee ’, is a 19-year-old teenager who is quite popular around his house because of his father. But Morello is also often teased by the children from his school because Morello's father does not have a father. Morello has a twin brother named Moe Perez. For some reason, his parents named him Ruell and the other has never been named. That ran away from home because of some problems with his parents. He lives with his twins Moe and Ruell, and his brother Ruell. They have Hispanic blood and live in El Corona, Los Santos. His father is a musician, and his mother is an ordinary housewife. Morello’s father died due to a gang-accident around the house. After his father died, Ruell helped the Perez family live their lives by raising more money. Not like Ruell, Morello can’t play basketball; he is not talented at playing basketball. His daily life is filled with playing music. Morello is very proficient at using the guitar. Because he is not talented at playing basketball , he can only watch Ruell play basketball. Moe is good at using the guitar and often sings with Moe because Moe really likes hip-hop songs. The Perez family only got money from Ruell because Morello dropped out of school because the money to pay for his school was not enough. Morello is very close to Moe and Ruell. They often play together and go out together. Moe always follows Ruell to play outside. Morello’s father is dead when Ruell wants to take him. Moe, Ruell, and Morello are close to the top dog of Florencia 13, because their father was very close and very familiar with the top dog of Florencia 13. The three brothers, Ruell, Moe, and Morello, are comfortable and like to play there because the people there are very welcoming of their arrival. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/234836-cn-salvador-costa-to-morello-perez-aptx178/#comment-2278415 Account UCP yang saya miliki: APTX178 Account Forum yang saya miliki: papiloz Saya papiloz selaku pemilik account UCP APTX178 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Morello_Perez) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
BGenk Posted September 16, 2022 Posted September 16, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
papiloz Posted September 16, 2022 Author Posted September 16, 2022 1. Tidak 2. 1 tahun lebih 3. Namechange 4. Tidak 5. Tidak 6. Di rumah
papiloz Posted September 18, 2022 Author Posted September 18, 2022 On 9/16/2022 at 8:39 PM, BGenk said: PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Reveal hidden contents Done
BGenk Posted September 18, 2022 Posted September 18, 2022 Ada yang perlu direvisi: Masih banyak grammar yang harus dibenerin, diperhatikan kembali
papiloz Posted September 18, 2022 Author Posted September 18, 2022 7 minutes ago, BGenk said: Ada yang perlu direvisi: Masih banyak grammar yang harus dibenerin, diperhatikan kembali Edited min.
BGenk Posted September 20, 2022 Posted September 20, 2022 Berikan 5 spasi setidaknya pada awal paragraf
papiloz Posted September 20, 2022 Author Posted September 20, 2022 11 hours ago, BGenk said: Berikan 5 spasi setidaknya pada awal paragraf Edited.
BGenk Posted September 20, 2022 Posted September 20, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @papiloz, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@BGenk JG:RP Helper Team
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